David
Foster Wallace visits a controversial and “uncomfortable” topic in the piece “Consider
the Lobster”. Initially, I felt like the first couple of pages were kind of
unnecessary or dragged on since he did not dive into his actual argument until
page 670. After reading it over again and taking a closer look, however, I realized
that the background information was important to his purpose.
Wallace
builds credibility through his introduction with facts so readers can see that
he knows what he’s doing. He slowly approaches his argument rather than jumping
right into the discriminate ethical tendencies of our society. He does not want
to scare readers away before he even gets a chance to share his point of view. This
is especially crucial considering the fact that his targeted audience is the Gourmet Magazine. He knows that if he stated
pointblank that their practices were unjust or that they were not considerate
about their choices, the readers would feel attacked. He also relates with the
reader by admitting that he is “confused” and feels “selfish interest” just as anyone
else would.
While
his lengthy use of footnotes might seem a bit excessive, I noticed that he
brought up an interesting point on the footnote on page 674. He pushes out of
the boundaries of lobster and connects to other animals that are also consumed.
He questions if “euphemisms like ‘beef’ and ‘pork’ help us separate the meat we
eat from the living creature the meat once was”. Although some may be unopen to
the ideas that Wallace wonders of our society, his techniques of writing this
piece were effective in at least making them question the morals involved in
their actions.
I really like your analysis of Wallace’s writing style! I thought his writing style was so remarkable - his thoughts were so deep and complex, even though they encompassed topics that are so ordinary and mundane for us (like eating lobster). His footnotes were very effective in swaying the reader, like you said, and I think it’s because he approached new ways of thinking that the rest of us have never even considered.
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